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| 26e26 Ju6 20, 2007 8:36 p06 Envision Chapter 1 (the defeated) |
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From now on i shall be using 1st person.. I shall make Kirkzy as the narrator...
"Ready or not here i go!" I shouted and rushed in the woods as i searched excitedly to seek Valerie and Manji... It was an ordinary day.The forests we've always been in never changed...Never changed at all. It was like paradise in a perspective manner. I knew that nothing would go wrong ever again... Till...
"That was real fun Kirkzy, lets go back in our place for a little lemonade" Valerie said. "sure Val, Its so fun to mess with Kirkz when he is it" Manji laughed and so did Valerie. "hey! I was just unlucky this time.Wait for tomorrow". Valerie and Manji have been my bestfriends since i was a young lad. We'd always stick together during the tough and happy moments. Nothing would ruin this friendship for we will stick together till end...
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"Momzy! we're back! i have a lot to tell you today" Valerie with her usual gladness in heart was so excited to tell her mom everything that had happened to her today. "Well i'll be seeing you guyz tomorrow then,see ya Kirkz, bye Val" Manji said and left... This day was the usual days when we go out together but today.. Something felt different...More than different...
The Kingdom of princess Val is outgoing and active all the time.Guards and Ministers would mingle around like buddys and it would seem that everyday would look like a celebration in the palace... Today... everything changed..."Momzy? whats wrong? did something happen to dadzy?"
"My dear Valerie... You're father he.... he... He died in battle" This was the 1st time ive ever seen Val schocked and in horrible pain... When i see her with her father, They act like the best of friends. His father would always tell storys of great battles and wars while Val always listened with gladness...
"No....... Dadzy is not dead! No hes not! NO! Hes not dead!" Kirzaiel tell me my dad is not dead! pls!" Val shed tears like the falls of the naga. She loved her dad so much.... Her heart was torn with a thousand needles when she heard the news. All i can do was to hold her and comfort her as much as I can... Thats all i can do... But I wished i did more for her... |
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| 26e26 Ju6 20, 2007 8:36 p06 |
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The loss of King Vilanced spread among the Castle... Everyone in the city wept like a cloud of rain... But no one's sadness can match Val's pain... Losing her father for her is losing a soul... "Val...everything will be alright. Maybe the God's did this for us to learn and be strong for the sake of our Country. Be strong, I'll be here for you"... Val said "How could you say those things?! You never even lost someone important to you before! Dont you dare say that!... I was speechless but i remembered my past pretty well during that time... "Hey Val... You're not the only person who lost someone dear to you... I lost someone too"... Val sat near me and asked "(sniff sniff)you did? but who?.. I said "Both my parents and my brothers together... I was walking along town. It was a bright day everything seemed normal... I went shopping that day to buy a present for my mom... It was her birthday that time... I bought her a small figurine of a golden peacock... A few blocks back to my home... I heard a scream... I rushed back to my home and discovered two killers inside our house who killed my mom and my brothers. My dad was tied in a pole trying to free himself... I was shocked like hell and was about to burst to tears... Then i remembered what my dad used to tell my during that time... "If something is to happen to us... always remember...Envision the Future... Capture it and seek for it and it shall reward you... I remembered it pretty well then i looked at my dad... He shouted that i Run away and remember what he said... I did ran... I lost everything... My family... My home... That's why i live in the castle's orphanage... Hoping to find this reward from the future... that is my goal... So don't over stress yourself with tears... I shall help you.. and protect you so that us both can find what the god's have envisioned for us"... "Kirkzy you're always so sensitive...But thanks for being there... Val said and she hugged me tight... "No prob princess Val....
(another plot coming up...
Will the Kingdom rise back up again and go back to its natural commodities?
Will Kirkz and Val Be the same again?
Will they see Manji again tomorrow?
What happened to the 5th Kairin's and King Marzol?
Is my story irritating to read because some have no connection?
Stay tuned for Chapter 2 (The 1st Kairin) |
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| 26e27 Ju6 20, 2007 8:36 p06 |
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... walang bumabasa except si oli...
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lacuer
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| 26e27 Ju6 20, 2007 8:36 p06 |
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| bumasa rin si jepp...... |
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| 26e27 Ju6 20, 2007 8:36 p06 |
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| papabasahin ko muna sa iba... kng walang magbabasa close ko na lng... T_T |
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EsPutniX DaRcY
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| 29e18 Ju7 20, 2007 8:36 p07 |
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wah paolo!
shakespeare of the 21st century! Lufet..!
Tuloy mo na lang...
binabasa rin naman ng iba eh... look there's many viewS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wehehehe...
okeh malelate na ako....
tuloy mo na fLehZ??? |
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